Frankly ... -and definitely, I no longer know if I should drool over your game-novel, or if I should cry ... Then now I am definitely reassured that this risks becoming absolutely exceptional work.
I will follow your work without a doubt, I reassure you even more than before, you have a talent / asset that many people do not have.
I definitely fell completely in love with your game-novel. (for me it's becoming absolutely perfect)
Speaking of something else ... - I noticed that you have taken into account some tips that are very beneficial to you.
You have nothing to thank, on the contrary, I am even proud of you.
You have evolved so much in such a short time that it is even impressive. - everything seems to rise/evolve in your favor, take the opportunity to take your own time to do what you have in your heart, be yourself, make your soul shine through in what you do. Then all of this really starts to get noticed.
In my thinking and feeling you really risk going very far, even if it is not your main job.
I sincerely have very good hope in you.
You can be proud of the beautiful person and genius that you are, and of the sublime work that you do.
Yes, with the monstrous, half-human form. It will probably be an optional scene(s) dependent on MC’s relationship score, but I’m working with models (both the base werewolf and genitalia) and posing to see what will work well.
Why not play it in a more Lycanthrope way...? - towards a more human/evolved version of this species...? Then in this form, all this merge very well with the general atmosphere of your game-Novel. (especially since a lot of very diverse affinity bonds could very well develop between all the characters that you have created) - there is already a very beautiful feeling that you have already created between them all, and it is becoming more and more interesting/intriguing and mysterious. (with a rather unique mythical side that spices up the curiosity of your audience)
Especially since you have already installed a little romanticism, sensuality and passion in the personality of the main character, you could possibly slightly accentuate all this towards certain characters, such as the detective for example, who seems to be being charmed and tenderly attracted to him. - for just one example, like an impossible love relationship ...?
And develop a rather special and wild (passionate/carnal) attraction of the main character to its creator. (these are just simple examples)
On the other hand, this young vampire who follows the main character everywhere, he sweats sensuality and a very protective and loyal side to his human heart. (especially since obviously he seems to have had a romantic relationship with the detective ...) - that on the other hand, it would be interesting (and funny) to see a werewolf with a vampire ... LOL
Regarding Dr. Ricci, it's hard to place him in this story other than the somewhat fatherly figure and best friend ... - but at the same time also with very deep feelings towards the main character ...
I think in Build 0.4 some of that will start to play out (but I'm not spoiling anything), and the long term plan and various endings will hit on a lot of those concepts.
Ricci is definitely kind of a "daddy" for those who are into seeing younger and older guys hook up. As to how exactly he fits into the metaplot... I won't confirm or deny anything.
It's very well done! - curiosity will leave cats on the alert ... (I'm talking about your audience of course)
All three already have fairly well defined and different characteristics, which already gives you many of the possibilities of very many/various beautiful stories.
Not to mention the creator of the main character's new personality ... - who at the moment seems to want to be very discreet and mysterious.
That's so awesome; thank you! I really appreciate the feedback! I'm already hard at work on the next update, with a draft of the first scene fully written. I'm finalizing work on the models for two new characters, then will begin the rendering, scripting, audio and so forth. Definitely more to come!
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Frankly ... -and definitely, I no longer know if I should drool over your game-novel, or if I should cry ... Then now I am definitely reassured that this risks becoming absolutely exceptional work.
I will follow your work without a doubt, I reassure you even more than before, you have a talent / asset that many people do not have.
I definitely fell completely in love with your game-novel. (for me it's becoming absolutely perfect)
Speaking of something else ... - I noticed that you have taken into account some tips that are very beneficial to you.
I hug you strongly.
Take good care of yourself.
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Thanks John!
You have nothing to thank, on the contrary, I am even proud of you.
You have evolved so much in such a short time that it is even impressive. - everything seems to rise/evolve in your favor, take the opportunity to take your own time to do what you have in your heart, be yourself, make your soul shine through in what you do. Then all of this really starts to get noticed.
In my thinking and feeling you really risk going very far, even if it is not your main job.
I sincerely have very good hope in you.
You can be proud of the beautiful person and genius that you are, and of the sublime work that you do.
Keep it up, handsome young buddy!
Will there be in the future romance and sex with a werewolf?
Yes, with the monstrous, half-human form. It will probably be an optional scene(s) dependent on MC’s relationship score, but I’m working with models (both the base werewolf and genitalia) and posing to see what will work well.
That's good to know! Can't wait! :)
Why not play it in a more Lycanthrope way...? - towards a more human/evolved version of this species...? Then in this form, all this merge very well with the general atmosphere of your game-Novel. (especially since a lot of very diverse affinity bonds could very well develop between all the characters that you have created) - there is already a very beautiful feeling that you have already created between them all, and it is becoming more and more interesting/intriguing and mysterious. (with a rather unique mythical side that spices up the curiosity of your audience)
Especially since you have already installed a little romanticism, sensuality and passion in the personality of the main character, you could possibly slightly accentuate all this towards certain characters, such as the detective for example, who seems to be being charmed and tenderly attracted to him. - for just one example, like an impossible love relationship ...?
And develop a rather special and wild (passionate/carnal) attraction of the main character to its creator. (these are just simple examples)
On the other hand, this young vampire who follows the main character everywhere, he sweats sensuality and a very protective and loyal side to his human heart. (especially since obviously he seems to have had a romantic relationship with the detective ...) - that on the other hand, it would be interesting (and funny) to see a werewolf with a vampire ... LOL
Regarding Dr. Ricci, it's hard to place him in this story other than the somewhat fatherly figure and best friend ... - but at the same time also with very deep feelings towards the main character ...
I think in Build 0.4 some of that will start to play out (but I'm not spoiling anything), and the long term plan and various endings will hit on a lot of those concepts.
Ricci is definitely kind of a "daddy" for those who are into seeing younger and older guys hook up. As to how exactly he fits into the metaplot... I won't confirm or deny anything.
I understand you... ;-)
It's very well done! - curiosity will leave cats on the alert ... (I'm talking about your audience of course)
All three already have fairly well defined and different characteristics, which already gives you many of the possibilities of very many/various beautiful stories.
Not to mention the creator of the main character's new personality ... - who at the moment seems to want to be very discreet and mysterious.
incredible
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! More to come!
Great work! Love the story so far, and the art;) Can't wait to see it develop
That's so awesome; thank you! I really appreciate the feedback! I'm already hard at work on the next update, with a draft of the first scene fully written. I'm finalizing work on the models for two new characters, then will begin the rendering, scripting, audio and so forth. Definitely more to come!